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I feel like the mom was a little harsh at the beginning but the story is really nice!
Well, goodbye soul. Bye emotions, bye mind walls. This story crumbles my mind in a flash, something previously unknown to me in writing. Good job, keep writing!
depressing...but it has a great moral to it
I love depressing stories and this was a great example..!
this was good, but told many times in different versions. well what you added to it was good, it was very vague and very been there done that. i don't mean to offend you, this is just my opinion
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