My sisters name is Sara, she actually acts like this...I am SCARED

I feel like the mom was a little harsh at the beginning but the story is really nice!

Well, goodbye soul. Bye emotions, bye mind walls. This story crumbles my mind in a flash, something previously unknown to me in writing. Good job, keep writing!

depressing...but it has a great moral to it

love it

I love depressing stories and this was a great example..!