she's still here (part two) Reviews
3 reviews have given an average rating of 5 out of 5 Stars
It's great, why did you think it isn't good?
♥ ᵍ๏вℓ𝓲ℕ ♥ just a thought
Author -
hvdiyya LOL, I know the feeling.
Reviewer -
Wow, this was perfect. I like how you left off right there when he sees her again. But, I thought he had tried to, y'know, follow in Everli's footsteps. What exactly happened is what I wanna know. Great writing, tho!
♥ ᵍ๏вℓ𝓲ℕ ♥ are you assuming he attempted to do the same thing everli did?
Author -
Lyn i thought he did, yea-
Reviewer -
♥ ᵍ๏вℓ𝓲ℕ ♥ well, i guess i can say you aren't 100% wrong, but what do i know? lol
Author -
Lyn hmmm, imma have to read over all the parts again then, lol
Reviewer -
♥ ᵍ๏вℓ𝓲ℕ ♥ it isn't something that i've necessarily said uwu
Author -
Lyn nope, but it was implied to the point where I recognized it
Reviewer -
i respectfully disagree with the author's note. this is good, it just feels unfinished, but since it's part 2, that's okay. i love how you depicted the change in everli. can't wait to read more :D