Lyn

This is beautiful, you deserve so much more than what you are receiving. This really touched my heart. Thanks for sharing this poem with us <3
You might never read this, but you really do deserve some love for this. It's incredible!

Wow, I can't wait to see where this is going! I need to know about these men she's being thrust upon in marriage so that I can decide who I like better. But, for now, I'd say that she should marry Gabriella's brother so that she may have a husband as well. You're very talented, keep writing!

Lost_Star's right! There are plenty of other guys out there who would die to love you the way that boy never could. Keep searching, you'll find them eventually! Great writing, by the way, I could really feel your emotion.

My, my, how the turntables...
A wonderful story! Your writing is so mesmerizing. I can't believe his uncle would do that. Well, okay, I was expecting something to go wrong, but that caught me off guard. Great job!

This is a beautiful writing technique! I hope that you're alright. I'm so sorry you had to go through something like this. If you would like to talk about it, I'm here. If you don't, I just pray that you're okay. Keep writing, you are so very talented <3

This is beautiful! It really touched my heart <3

This is beautiful! I fully agree. You shouldn't judge people so easily. I also think that you should get to know a person before judging them, such as the girl you spoke of. She might be going through something that you didn't know about. Just try to give people the benefit of the doubt, it might just change your perspective on everything!

This is incredible! You are so very talented! You deserve so much more than you are receiving. Keep writing and unleashing your creativity, it's beautiful!