Lyn

My friend and I grew apart, too. This is a very emotional story for me. Thank you for sharing it <3

Beautiful! The last sentence needs a capital letter and gat is actually spelled got. Maybe add an apostrophe S at the end of she, like: She's got no clue. A beautiful poem, keep writing!

I'm so sorry you feel this way about someone. I hope your relationship gets better soon, but I want you to know that it's okay to not say I love you all the time. You don't have to say it to make sure others know it. Show it through your actions. I'm positive your friend knew how much you cared for them, so don't beat yourself up. Brilliant writing, keep going!

I'll be waiting, no need to worry.
Great job with the rhyming, it was very smooth. And somehow the poem sounded like sweet buttermilk??? I don't know if I'm just really tired, but that's how it felt. Keep writing, you're very talented.

Don't let your mind win. You are an incredible person, and if I can see that from across a screen it must be true. Brains can be annoying and complete buttholes sometimes, but you can't let yours get the best of you.
I wish you the best as you work through this. Keep going, you're worth it.

A beautiful display of friendship! Great job :D

Oh my goodness! A wonderfully written story! You did amazing and I had tears in my eyes when you wrote that Melody was gone. I loved it so so so so so much!!! Keep writing, it’s gorgeous!

A glorious description of God’s love for all of us! Brilliant writing!