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-Lynnyan- is from US United States • 18 y/o • Female

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I Though We Had More Time by hvdiyya

The horrible tragedy of losing someone without getting to tell them you love them. It hurts. More than words can describe. But you captured that pain and wrote it down into words. Good job!

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help by hvdiyya

Interesting. I wonder what number 7 is referring to. You did a great job! I love how you wrote in lowercase, it gives the writing a more nonchalant feel, even if it's about death.

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A Love Hate Relationship by PuffyPancakes

I think I saw something like this a while ago-
I dunno if that inspired it or not, but all in all it's a really good idea. Great job!

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The Angels by hvdiyya

A gorgeous piece of writing. You did an incredible job, as always! I can't describe how thankful I am for you, Had!

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How Long by Sepperince

This really spoke to my heart. You did a great job putting these emotions into words. I can't wait to read more of your works!

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The Pain by hvdiyya

The tragedy of losing someone so very dear to you. It hurts and you showed that really well! I like how you changed up the style throughout the poem, it made it interesting to read. Great job!

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I Am Sorry by HazbinAllover

I don't know what it is that you did, but I'd forgive you. And if whoever this is for is important, they will too.

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If Fairytales Made Sense by PuffyPancakes

Please do more of this! I really enjoyed it :D

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