Lyn

how flippin dare you >:(((
you did get me tho-

q^q am I rly that gullible?

Yes. Just yes. The emotions and the way I can relate is just. Yes.

I've never been in love either, so I'm probably not the best person to be writing this review. From what I can tell, the main character is suffering from depression, and whoever their crush is is the reason they're still here. I could feel the emotion and I just wanted to say to keep writing, you're really good!

Please continue this! I need to know what happened q^q

Wow, a great example of being scared to be your true self around others. You're really great at poetry! I could never qwq
Keep writing, you're a champion!

This is so sad :( I hope you're doing alright. I'm here to talk if you wanna, just remember that.
The poem was really good, though! I love how you said that the father was a hero. That really put the oomph in it. I love how it's a story-poem, where the poem tells a story. You're very talented!

Great job! I know exactly what you wrote this for >:3 And, no, poems don't always have to rhyme.

My heart-
Great job, I love your technique!