Lyn

This is a great story! You're very talented. I could really feel Jack's guilt when you told me about it. It's sad how people can manage to find ways to tie horrible incidents back to them and claim the incident as their fault. I hope you'll continue writing because you're a natural. Great job!

Please continue this! I need to know what happened q^q

Wow, a great example of being scared to be your true self around others. You're really great at poetry! I could never qwq
Keep writing, you're a champion!

Great job! I know exactly what you wrote this for >:3 And, no, poems don't always have to rhyme.

My heart-
Great job, I love your technique!

That's pretty funny! I think we all feel that way nowadays. You've brought a smile to my face, so thank you!

My friend and I grew apart, too. This is a very emotional story for me. Thank you for sharing it <3

Please continue! You did a great job! I love how you even included George's colorblind point of view. A great story, I can't wait for more of this.