Lyn

Wow, what a great piece of writing! You did an incredible job explaining how he had left, excited to see her. But then when he left, it felt more of in a zombie state. The way you explained how she didn't offer her lips first really shows their relationship. I'd love to see more with these characters!

Very amusing, good job! XD
No, I haven't had a dream like the one you first described, or maybe I just don't remember it-
I actually have managed to not hit the ground in the falling dream. I start levitating at the last second. It gives me the weird gut feeling like you said.
I've never written a dream down, but I remember the weird ones. Or, maybe I only have weird dreams..? I have some of them posted if you wanna check those out- Or, you know, if you don't-

Yes, please! It's still just as creepy as the first time I saw it. I really wanna know what happens. D:

I like how you described a few of the sins and let the others be more of a mystery. I'm a detective, so this'll be fun to figure out! :D
Good job describing Amaia, it was like I could almost see her. You're a very talented writer, keep going!

Gorgeous. Absolutely gorgeous.
Every girl needs to find this letter hidden somewhere in their life. Thank you for sharing it <3

This is one of the best things you've written! The way you described the snow was perfect, great job! I'm so intrigued by how you wrote the cat's dialogue. How did they lose their name? And why was the spirit a cat, anyway? I would love to see more like this!

Wow, great job explaining this! I've never had an occurrence like this, at least not one I can remember. You have a few run-on sentences, but that's easily fixed. If you'd like some help editing it, I'm here if you need me!

I would really like to know where this came from. It’s okay if you don’t wanna talk abt it, tho. Just know that I’m here if you ever want to talk (about anything at all).
The poem was great! It was like a flowing story and I really like that. You are an incredible writer, all you need is a little confidence.