Lyn

Nooo, i dont want my imaginary friends to fade. Writing about them shall keep them alive >:3
A lovely story, though. I think it might sound better if the imaginary friend acted as a child might, though. Instead of calling Timothy "dear," try calling him "buddy" or something. there were a few grammatical mistakes, but those are easily overlooked. Over all, it was pretty good! I enjoyed reading it :)

There is a lot of potential here! A handful of your grammatical errors are quite easy to fix, and that will entice readers to stay longer to read a bit more. If you want some advice or want to ask me to shut up, feel free to message me.

I loved it, you did a fantastic job tying it all together! I know I'm really late, but I just wanted to show my love for this. You have an amazing writing technique! I had a similar idea to write something like this, so it won't be exactly like yours, but it will have a similar ring to it. I hope that's alright with you because I'm already pretty far into the story. I just wanted you to know that I don't mean to steal your idea and I certainly won't be posting an exact replica of it.

This is beautiful, you deserve so much more than what you are receiving. This really touched my heart. Thanks for sharing this poem with us <3
You might never read this, but you really do deserve some love for this. It's incredible!

Yes, that is what I would do,
If I were an author.

Beautiful <3

Yes. Just yes.

That last line is hilarious! You're very talented, I look forward to reading more of your stories.

This is amazing! That driver is so kind to tell them what he thinks they should do. I know of about a dozen people who would just bring them to their destination and watch as they get mugged. I really enjoyed your writing, it made my day!