Lyn

So glad I found this! You are an incredible writer. I love the way you explained how this world works while also tying a story to it. If I'm not mistaken, this narrator is our first narrator's brother. Keep writing, you're incredibly talented.

I love the technique. The way you tied it together at the end is perfect. You're an amazing writer, I'm sorry I didn't give you this review earlier. I may not agree with what it's saying, but I can overlook that. A beautiful story filled with love <3

This is a great story! You're very talented. I could really feel Jack's guilt when you told me about it. It's sad how people can manage to find ways to tie horrible incidents back to them and claim the incident as their fault. I hope you'll continue writing because you're a natural. Great job!

Please continue this! I need to know what happened q^q

Wow, a great example of being scared to be your true self around others. You're really great at poetry! I could never qwq
Keep writing, you're a champion!

Great job! I know exactly what you wrote this for >:3 And, no, poems don't always have to rhyme.

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Great job, I love your technique!

That's pretty funny! I think we all feel that way nowadays. You've brought a smile to my face, so thank you!