Lyn

Please do more of this! I really enjoyed it :D

This is a great story! You're very talented. I could really feel Jack's guilt when you told me about it. It's sad how people can manage to find ways to tie horrible incidents back to them and claim the incident as their fault. I hope you'll continue writing because you're a natural. Great job!

how flippin dare you >:(((
you did get me tho-

q^q am I rly that gullible?

Yes. Just yes. The emotions and the way I can relate is just. Yes.

I've never been in love either, so I'm probably not the best person to be writing this review. From what I can tell, the main character is suffering from depression, and whoever their crush is is the reason they're still here. I could feel the emotion and I just wanted to say to keep writing, you're really good!

Please continue this! I need to know what happened q^q

Wow, a great example of being scared to be your true self around others. You're really great at poetry! I could never qwq
Keep writing, you're a champion!

This is so sad :( I hope you're doing alright. I'm here to talk if you wanna, just remember that.
The poem was really good, though! I love how you said that the father was a hero. That really put the oomph in it. I love how it's a story-poem, where the poem tells a story. You're very talented!