United States • 18 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
i like it
You're drawing readers in by describing their sadness but not yet explaining the reason for it. With 'Anyway Back' there should be a lower case 'b' in 'back,' but more practice should fix issues like that.
I like the way you spell out 'I'm fine' with initial letters of negative emotions.
cool, dark for a 12 yr old, but cool
Sweet!
omgg i LOVED how you like boldened the words and put the commas in there it really gave it a sort of.. beat.