AaronTheRocker

Dude. Aaron. Hermano.
You got me with this one.

The words and how it flows, the structure of the sentences, like dang son. You got words, style and rhythm that can grab anyone's attention.

I also like the whole idea of how you made a piece of string more than a piece of string as it can be transformed into something beautiful.

P.S: You could totally rap this poem.

This sounds a lot like the terrifying book Revelation. I like how you started the poem how you did, with sin breeding in the mind and taking over all. So true. The whole word play on reign and rain is cool here too. Definitely will be a scary time. But hey, we know the ending that Jesus wins. I also like these lines: "Danger it lives, freedom it dies/ rewriting rules of humanity." The entire push-and-pull of evil and good here is a cool topic. Our world is such a wild place.