United States • 23 y/o • MaleReviews Received
This is beautiful! It really touched my heart <3
Woah, this is incredible. I’ll admit, I’m scared to talk full-on about my beliefs with my friends. I also know that I label a lot :(
You caught me off guard when you admitted that you had lied about all of the beliefs you had written down. I was ready to accept you and say, “It’s okay for us to have different view points.†But it was all fake! I love the way you tied it all together. Great job!
I definitely agree, there's actually a criminal justice term called the Labeling Theory that explores exactly that. It's usually more used with addicts, criminals, homeless, and those labels, but it applies for all. Thanks for letting us into your brain.
This was a legit, good story not gonna lie! Keep up the work!
This was so good and ended with a good twist! I knew something was up with that bunny! Keep up the work, I love the horror stories you create.
Dang! This was short but good! Me and my best friend was reading this together and was like, That’s the end?! But it’s all fine, this story was good and kind of creep! Keep up the work of writing!
This was to beautiful! The poem is very nice! Keep up the work of writing! Have a nice day!
The point of art is to cause controversy by bringing an issue to light- whether it be an internal conflict, a political issue, a human rights issue or anything else. Thank you for utilizing art in its purposed form.
You often incorporate a sort of song style with background singers through parenthesis, it's almost a traditional trait of yours so I appreciate that was put in here again. I like how you personified Time and Nature as well as the lines "fragile life turned broken glass." This poem is a story with beautiful structure and perspective that catches your gut and makes you think. Thanks, again, for sharing a piece of your mind with us.