AaronTheRocker

This reminds me of the book Ecclesiastes. Everything we see will perish and is essentially meaningless; it's what we do with what we see that channels meaning. The idea of anchoring all these aspects with the same phrase "like everything under the sun" reminds us of how we're all connected in this way. It's an interesting style because there's a hint of dread and hope at the same time. Cool concept.

I love this idea of nature being dead and resurrected through Spring- it truly is the cycle of growth in us as well and the way you portrayed it was vivid. I do believe nature knows truths about life that we simply don't. Thanks for sharing my appreciation with nature in this piece.
I especially like the third stanza. Growth is so painful yet so important. What we do matters and our suffering is not in vain. Again, all of this is literally the story of the Gospel so that what it reminds me of- we were dead in our sins until Jesus allowed for us to be born again through His spirit. Ephesians 2:1-10 is all about this concept. Rebirth is painful and the fruits of it are love. I also appreciate the title and repetition of Blossom and Bloom. I didn't know the difference of these two concepts until I looked them up, and it's very fitting for the purpose of this piece, so I like that detail too.

I enjoyed your poem. Well done.

You describe the scene well. Sitting by watet can indeed be very relaxing.

this is so lovely!

I 100%, agree and I'd like to add another point of view in a psychological comparison. Now I'm not saying this is everyone or even a majority of people but unfortunately, there are people who go trans and/or lqbtq+ simply for attention. It's like when one child in an elementary classroom gets special treatment and the other kids see it then EVERYONE wants the same special treatment.