Reviews Given
This is sad. After reading this I thought about the book and movie "A Walk To Remember" and felt the same emotions as this story did for me. 😢
I liked how you presented the idea of a loss happening making it true to it's experience and the reminiscence of it.
Amazing writing.
Humans. The most social organism on the planet and an organism that depends on others.
Sometimes you gotta lay love on the line. An English band named "Shy" best well says the story of this with their song, "Love On The Line".
Yo, my river of imagination will never run dry as I have an ocean of imagination. Imagination I know is true that reaches to the deepest depths and spreads through out the world of creativity drowning me sometimes where I then wake up on a life boat looking out to the waters still searching again for a new discovery.
I thought life was all about sex, drugs, Rock n' Roll.
This was pretty good.
Whoa...did anyone who read this get reminded of the movie, "The Labyrinth" with David Bowie? I can't be the only one who did.
I like where this is going.
Yo, this is perfect. The best "stories" that are told are the ones that are short and simple.
I will be there.
Be there for you by your side.
Be there if you need a shoulder to cry on.
Be able to have you trust me.
I will be there.
It may not be physically or mentally there and may not even know you, but will be there to help guide.
I will watch over with caring eyes and a loving heart.
I will answer you.
I will tell you always.