AaronTheRocker

I'm a dude and just looking at the title scared me into believing that it would be just bashing guys, but now I see it is more about friendship and am happy about that. Having many friends that are chicks, I can actually relate to this. Usually women bond together after a heartache or a heartbreak and say, "you can do better" and, "he doesn't deserve your heart", so I totally see where you come from on this.

Dang. I wish I had the Protector as my personal body guard. A cloak, scythe, and red eyes...this figure has got some style.
For someone who belongs to Hufflepuff, got to give this all stars to a Gryffindor.

This may be your first, but is a sure good one.

This is just....just.... words can't describe how well written this is.
5 of 5 stars.

This was a pretty good story. Kinda strange for an American to read something like this being that the U.K has the passenger side on the left, and (from reading this) when you try get through an experience that was unsettling, you pour wine, where us Americans would crack open a cold beer.
The imagery was a new experience for me and that was awesome.
I wish that you had more interaction with or description of the ghost as to that it seems that it sort of just came and went with no reason to be in the vehicle. I know it was an accident that happened and the ghost had no reason to bring fear or vengeance towards people, but it seemed so bare and minimal with the ghost.
Overall though, great.

This was a great setup for the reader to receive the emotion when reading.
One thing that could be done is by having "You know my favourite song and I know yours" towards the beginning. When I read it, I felt drawn away from the progression of the whole idea or meaning behind this. Overall quality though was amazing.

Loved the ending. The last sentence couldn't be any better as it was so well used.