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I don't know the song, but I just went through the words and made it into an ol' school rap style ('cause ya'll know ol' school da best style of rap).
As a man, this was hard for me to read. The thought that men think of women as sex-objects, lesser and weak just perplexes my mind. It doesn't make any sense. Everyone should treat everyone with respect and dignity whatever status may be given especially women because my belief/value is that men were created to protect and help women as the idea of Adam giving Eve his rib. I feel horrified for you that you believe and think that this is just how men are towards women. You writing this is one step closer to not only help yourself overcome this, but also for others out there that may feel or experience the same. Because the only way to overcome an obstacle is to make yourself stronger. Last to end with, know that there are men & women out there fighting the good fight for all people.
Strange how that is. Someone you don't know, someone totally random, someone who just pops up is the one person who can change your life.
Remarkable.
My mind went somewhere else and I'm not sure where.
Dang. A work of art that is held so true in many lives. The wanting of approval, but to speak one's mind never mixes well most times especially when it's a lifestyle and it is a shame.
Truly profound writing.
There is beauty in broken and what is great about broken things, they can usually be fixed. May not be in the best of shape, but it sure does help.
Fine writing. Flows like a calm river. Gentle, but filled with great bountiful meaning.
Sounds like you contracted a case of the "fallsies".
He belongs in a song book like you said and record labels, covers of magazines and ads, in movies and on products, hell...even make a mascot of his replication.
The birth of Jesus made possible not just a new way of understanding life but a new way of living it.
- Frederick Buechner