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Ah, young wise one, do you not see what you have done for the people surrounding you? Their lives could be better or for worse because of you and if it is for worse, that is their problem as for they have to learn to accept that not everything is perfect. Even Jesus Christ wasn't perfect. He claims that killing one's self is wrong, yet he sacrificed himself for our sins (not trying to be religious, but I'm taking an aspect to show my point of thinking). For everything, there is a reason, so at that point, it is not worthless.
Hey, can't win them all. Only thing you can do is make the best of what is given.
Sorry that it has come to this after all those strenuous years😞
It...It...It fits too perfectly. I don't know what else to say.
I like this whole astro-nature projection of imagery, if that is what you want to call it, for your world. I think I actually got lost in another dimension reading this. I'm just wonderin' what the "1:48am" title has to do with it? I'm guessing it was a dream that you've awaken from at the time or something along those lines, right?
I thought life was all about sex, drugs, Rock n' Roll.
This was pretty good.
Yo, my river of imagination will never run dry as I have an ocean of imagination. Imagination I know is true that reaches to the deepest depths and spreads through out the world of creativity drowning me sometimes where I then wake up on a life boat looking out to the waters still searching again for a new discovery.
We all wish for these things and wish these things would exist. Truth is, it is out there, it's a shame that it is hiding though.
Some grammar threw me off for a bit, but I didn't let it bother me from the idea.
If Odd was playing along to the Metal ballad "Keep Holding On" by Wasp, that would be perfect because that song has the bongos.
Great idea for a story.