Reviews Given
It is an interesting way to write. Who would have thought to write a letter? This is just brilliant.
I'm reminded of a quote that fits this, "When we give ourselves up to pain or humility, we give up our essence of humanity."
-Aaron Solberg
I've gotta say this. People don't really know this, but I used to be that way. Cutting myself, bring myself into bad situations, or just thinking that there is nothing left for me. That all changed for me though. For me, I don't write to express. I use quotes to express (I don't do it much anymore as I am better emotionally now). These quotes helped me get through as for people didn't really notice how I was feeling or if there was trouble 'cause I was more of a loner type. From using those quotes and remembering them when something was said or done to me and/or others, I just pulled them from my memory file and said it to myself making the situation seem brighter compared to dwelling on it and letting it eat me.
If you or someone you know is hurting themselves mentally and/or physically, please contact them or someone you can trust.
"Everyone is important... Some day moon leave you... On that day stars helps you." -Ashiq Ibru
Loved the ending. The last sentence couldn't be any better as it was so well used.
This was a great setup for the reader to receive the emotion when reading.
One thing that could be done is by having "You know my favourite song and I know yours" towards the beginning. When I read it, I felt drawn away from the progression of the whole idea or meaning behind this. Overall quality though was amazing.
This was a pretty good story. Kinda strange for an American to read something like this being that the U.K has the passenger side on the left, and (from reading this) when you try get through an experience that was unsettling, you pour wine, where us Americans would crack open a cold beer.
The imagery was a new experience for me and that was awesome.
I wish that you had more interaction with or description of the ghost as to that it seems that it sort of just came and went with no reason to be in the vehicle. I know it was an accident that happened and the ghost had no reason to bring fear or vengeance towards people, but it seemed so bare and minimal with the ghost.
Overall though, great.
This is just....just.... words can't describe how well written this is.
5 of 5 stars.
This may be your first, but is a sure good one.