Reviews Given
Sounds like you contracted a case of the "fallsies".
He belongs in a song book like you said and record labels, covers of magazines and ads, in movies and on products, hell...even make a mascot of his replication.
The birth of Jesus made possible not just a new way of understanding life but a new way of living it.
- Frederick Buechner
Would it be normal of me to give this 5 stars? *Twilight Zone music*
I can totally relate to this in it's meanings because I'm one of those people who takes time to appreciate everything.
The words are structured in such a way when just spoken with no heavy emotion or changes in tone, it holds value to it.
The progress in detail of this stranger-than-fiction word 'love' in a personal way is astounding. From words, actions, feelings and meaning, it's all there.
As long as the hands of time turn, love will come again.
This just fits so well. The structure and flow is nice and clean along with progression of the story.
I was thinking at first, "oh, it's losing a friend." Well it wasn't losing a friend in the way I thought of it.
This hit me hard, not just emotionally, but also in a connection. I've lost a friend from suicide and ever since then, I've been different and just wondering "what we didn't have" after.
Great poem and thank you for giving me a connection, a way to have my thoughts and feelings expressed even when this is in your words and I'm just reading it.
It...It...It fits too perfectly. I don't know what else to say.
This is astonishing!
The deep, thick, heavy imagery is like you are painting a high-detailed moving picture with words to make it mystical and give it the movement that makes it come alive in our brains to create what we see, what we think and feel.
A true work of art.
Just like what Lynnyan said, you are talented and deserve more and the best.