Addie

This is so beautiful and sweet! I was shocked by the ending, but the ending made the story so much better! Keep on writing!

Very well written. I love the plot. Great job!

Great story! Love the suspense!

I don't think it's too short. Sometimes less is more.

Very good! More please!

So sweet and well put together! I love everything about it! Great job!

Very good! I especially liked the author's note. A very similar experience happened to me when I was about 7. Keep up the good work!

I just was shocked at the brilliance of this story. It's just perfect. Keep on writing! You have a talent!