This is so beautiful and sweet! I was shocked by the ending, but the ending made the story so much better! Keep on writing!
I don't think it's too short. Sometimes less is more.
Great story! Love the suspense!
Very well written. I love the plot. Great job!
So sweet and well put together! I love everything about it! Great job!
Very good! I especially liked the author's note. A very similar experience happened to me when I was about 7. Keep up the good work!
Very good! More please!
Nice story! I love a good romantic love triangle! Very well written except for a few grammar and punctuation mistakes! Keep up the good work!