Skylar

I'm confused, why is this bad? Its well written and i actually felt something which is hard for me normally. I didn't catch any major errors and for 14 this is really good. Great Job! Keep writing.

So sad! So good, but so sad!

This is great! I mean it's very sad but still great!

That's true.

As grim as that message is its the truth. Those who do good always seem to end up with a shorter life. It was well written.

Well that is one way to look at depression and I can agree.

This sounds true. I can’t imagine what depression is like. I wish I could, because it’s so common, but I get the feeling from this that maybe I don’t really need to. This life sucks so often! Why can’t there be an all round feeling of love and peace and that good stuff?
This gives me a small view of depression.