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Ca-rhys-ta??? Love the story so far! <3

awwww! Way to go, Andyyy! <3

Kinda cliche with words and meaning, but it was a good cliche.
Though I think that if you swapped the last three lines to be,

'I vow to be patient and true
to take you as you are

But most of all,
I vow to always love you'

I feel that would send it in a rhythm to have a nice soft ending.

You've done a good job of evoking the atmosphere in that kitchen. You used the crossings out well too.

Well, I vow that this a lovely and sincere poem that's beautifully written. <3

I love this.