United States • 25 y/oReviews Given
I enjoyed this. I love how you can tell you put emotion into it. I would say there were some grammar mistakes which is perfectly fine, just, at times made it harder to read. Overall well done.
This is an intense and very heavy story. You wrote it very well.
This was a great mixture of love and sadness. It made me emotional. Love your stuff keep writing.
This story is very well written, I actually wanted you to keep going. Your story actually made me physically and mentally ready. Well done
This was really well written.
this is good!
You shared her side perfectly. The stuttering, the messing words up. It was well written.
I really liked this, and kinda hated it but only because it was sad yet loved it!