Annielol399

Strong, colorful words provide a raw powerful descriptions here............nice job.......

powerful

I like the use of bold words. It makes the emotions a little stronger.
Five stars

Beautiful work of art in words

This is so deep. Your words have such a great flow. I love it! Great job! :)

As with most poems, there are some strange word choices here, but that isn't important. The emotional story it tells is awesome.

beautifull

this is deep. and its like you just described me