United States • 22 y/oReviews Given
No, go for it.
I see a couple of spacing errors as well as grammatical mistakes so the quality of this is poor but it's a decent story outside of those.
Overall good writing but this isn't philosophy.
This is not satire. It sounds narrow-minded. Are you sure you don't have a complex?
You could start by categorizing your work correctly. This isn't satire.
Now that was satire!
Bonus points for the comedy.
I didn't think it was possible but you've managed to increase the rate in which my brain cells deplete.
This wasn't sad and I had trouble finding the flow