Andy (Formerly Apemann)

Well here's one day when you can feel very much accepted. :-) Good poem.

So much said in so few words. I like this - a lot!

An unusual and interesting story which was well told. I like your imagination and your unusual ideas. Well done!

I quite enjoyed the style of your writing. It's innovative and interesting, in spite of the bleak subject matter. I have to admit to being somewhat baffled by your 'author's note' comment... Overall, a commendable effort.

Mysterious and creepy. The use of so few words and the snappy delivery give this poem great impact. Great work!

Sometimes a hug is just about all you need to set your world to rights. I relate to your poem strongly - as will many others I'm sure :-)

This is a very sweet and very mature poem. Only one minor issue: the word 'farther' should be 'further'. Other than that, superb! :-)

Simple, effective and well presented. Good stuff!