Andy (Formerly Apemann)

A fun read :-) Well done!

I really like this short but poignant piece. You express so much feeling in so few words, which is rather skilful. Well done you! :-)

Well here's one day when you can feel very much accepted. :-) Good poem.

So much said in so few words. I like this - a lot!

An unusual and interesting story which was well told. I like your imagination and your unusual ideas. Well done!

I quite enjoyed the style of your writing. It's innovative and interesting, in spite of the bleak subject matter. I have to admit to being somewhat baffled by your 'author's note' comment... Overall, a commendable effort.

Mysterious and creepy. The use of so few words and the snappy delivery give this poem great impact. Great work!

Sometimes a hug is just about all you need to set your world to rights. I relate to your poem strongly - as will many others I'm sure :-)