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Feelings expressed well
The void of the unknown, ever so scary
Could have exploited the idea much more
Really well written
Let's not give ourselves and our fate to an 'idea' that is GOD.
Let us believe in our destiny and more forward in the path which we feel is right
Beautifully written
Beautifully written poem with good imagery.
Perhaps warning a female that you are not really whom you seem?
Very interesting idea