this was such a simple but amazing story! i love the details and the way you ended it was amazing! :)
I love this story!!! The detail is amazing and I can almost imagine the scenes in my head. Great job with the plot and characters! keep writing
you have to write more!!!! this series was so good and it cant just end now and here!
this is such an empowering story. great job and keep writing!
yasssssssssssssssss! you must keep writing! there are grammatical issues but there not huge. anyway keep writing i'm literally DYING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!
this is such a sad love story. i love the details but does the girl live by herself and also where are her parents? just wondering where are the guys parents in all of this. just next time include a backstory. but i love this piece of writing! i love the ending and it really completes the story and i love how the man is telling this story to the daughter! keep writing you are amazing at it!!!
This is such a sad yet amazing story!