India • 21 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
About the lawgiver, we have never had any evidence of the existence of God. About what to believe, we should think of the outcome of every action to identify it as good or bad. There has never been any lawgiver, it was always us humans using holy names to fulfill our own greed. I believe if we ever got to hear anything from God, there would have been no crimes.
If I have no grief of losing someone then does it mean that I never actually loved him?
beautifull
Sad, true and Beautiful. (I am a fan of rhymes) keep it up.
"Circumstances are nothing in front of your strength"( hope it makes you feel better, it's true though). Keep it up.😇
I personally like this poem, plain words but used in a way that they really touch hearts. The work not only displays your love but also your innocence. Keep it up. And I am really sorry.
this poem touched my heart , real and deep and i love the rhymes, keep it up
Ok, being abnormal is something unique in me. Don't feel bad if you are different from others, you are special. About your thoughts, especially about school, are not at all abnormal. In this era, we children are made to suffer from all this. Anyway, competition is for normal ones. We are special so we just need to concentrate on our goal and certainly, we would do something they all will admire.