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What a beautiful story <3
Reminds me of a happier version of a mother with one eye and it embarrasses the child so much that when he got older he didn't let his children see their grandmother. When his mother died, she left him a note saying that she gave him his eye. This is so good. ;')
I'm actually laughing really hard right now. This is the best story I've ever read. Keep up the fantastic work!
I love this, gives off a nostalgic feel!
Wow! This is one of the rare times that a story had left me begging for more! Please continue, I love this!
-Auron
Wow! This is great, I love this a lot! Write more poems, you have he talent in you.
-Auron
What a beautiful poem! I enjoyed the use of the capitalized 'She' as kiraafinifrock had stated. It makes it seem like the person you are speaking of is very important in your life. It makes the poem more touching and sincere. Great job!
Nice! Reminds me of an X Files episode, but different, nonetheless. I was worried it would be the same, but it wasn't, so I like your originality.