United States • 20 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
I enjoy this story because of how smooth the words flow together. Great job!
This is a great story! Although, it would be better if there were chapters. It seems like there should be more. Like, how her parents died, for example, and about her Aunt. There were a few grammar mistakes that can be easily fixed.
Other than that, I enjoyed this short story. Good job!
Despairing story, but great and touching!
A truly eerie story! I kept looking behind me while reading, haha! Great job!
I for one enjoy this story greatly! It is heartwarming, yet sad. Great job!
This is a great story! One of the better ones I've seen. Will you write any more?
Very good! I enjoy this story a lot! Missing a few commas here and there, but it's probably different in the U.K.
I love this beautiful short story because there's not many like it. Overall, good job, but it had a few mistakes such as:
'Just than, I woke up.'
Instead it should've been;
"Just then, I woke up."
Just be sure to check it through before submitting, but nice job!