Auron

I for one enjoy this story greatly! It is heartwarming, yet sad. Great job!

This is a great story! One of the better ones I've seen. Will you write any more?

Very good! I enjoy this story a lot! Missing a few commas here and there, but it's probably different in the U.K.

I love this beautiful short story because there's not many like it. Overall, good job, but it had a few mistakes such as:

'Just than, I woke up.'

Instead it should've been;

"Just then, I woke up."

Just be sure to check it through before submitting, but nice job!

I agree with lemonslice. You shouldn't start a story without knowing who is speaking.

Beyond that, I enjoyed the story, keep up the good work!

This is very touching as Christian myself, good job!

What a beautiful story <3

Reminds me of a happier version of a mother with one eye and it embarrasses the child so much that when he got older he didn't let his children see their grandmother. When his mother died, she left him a note saying that she gave him his eye. This is so good. ;')