Auron

This is a great story! Although, it would be better if there were chapters. It seems like there should be more. Like, how her parents died, for example, and about her Aunt. There were a few grammar mistakes that can be easily fixed.

Other than that, I enjoyed this short story. Good job!

Despairing story, but great and touching!

A truly eerie story! I kept looking behind me while reading, haha! Great job!

Very good! I enjoy this story a lot! Missing a few commas here and there, but it's probably different in the U.K.

This is a great story! One of the better ones I've seen. Will you write any more?

This is very touching as Christian myself, good job!

What a beautiful story <3

Reminds me of a happier version of a mother with one eye and it embarrasses the child so much that when he got older he didn't let his children see their grandmother. When his mother died, she left him a note saying that she gave him his eye. This is so good. ;')