United States • 19 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
Despairing story, but great and touching!
It would be an interesting story if it wasn't for the poor grammar and punctuation. I stopped reading it for this reason. You have a thing for writing, just read your story before submitting.
A truly eerie story! I kept looking behind me while reading, haha! Great job!
This is a great story! One of the better ones I've seen. Will you write any more?
Reminds me of a happier version of a mother with one eye and it embarrasses the child so much that when he got older he didn't let his children see their grandmother. When his mother died, she left him a note saying that she gave him his eye. This is so good. ;')
I'm actually laughing really hard right now. This is the best story I've ever read. Keep up the fantastic work!
Very good! I enjoy this story a lot! Missing a few commas here and there, but it's probably different in the U.K.
What a beautiful story <3