Rora

The writing is beautiful! I love the way you describe your characters! （＾○＾）☆

Wow. Such a good story. I really like the idea of making death a girl. Good job! :D

I really like it!

This is so true! Music has such a magnificent way of communicating not only to hearts, but our minds and our souls. It has a way of lifting us up, telling a story, and carrying us on a wave of melody. It's truly amazing...

I love it. I I love how you described her I feel like you could close your eyes and see her walking.

Yeah

It was graphic, very detailed in explanation. some kind of wanted to read more, to know where the adventure goes. I bet I'd discover something will happen with those cousins, and siblins of mom and Zaddie.

This is another amazing way to look at life, we all have trials and this poem illustrates that fact in a way all of us can appreciate.