depressing, but I love it!
I love the vocabulary in this chapter it makes the story more alluring to read. Can't wait for chapter 3!!
I keep reading all of your writing and I feel like I'm looking for the other half to my heart in your writing. So amazing!!
I like it so far. I can't wait to see more of it.
Ghost and lost don't rhyme but I like the poem.
I like the way this was written but it needs more to make it more powerful. The idea is amazing though and your wording is spectacular.
Inspirational for sure. I really liked the way this was written!