Bosnia and Herzegovina • 8 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
I like where the story is going, But it's not there yet. keep working on it :)
this is good. really relatable.
strange, but funny
this was good, but told many times in different versions. well what you added to it was good, it was very vague and very been there done that. i don't mean to offend you, this is just my opinion
this is good, i find it slightly empty, lacking emotion. there's emotion in there but as a reader i can't connect to it. it's written well and with a bit more work, it will be great.
don't mean to offend you, so please don't think that. this is just my opinion.