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this is really well written. Good job!!

It was nice.

Poor doggy... rest in peace. <3

Nice job!! you did good

This was amazing! I loved the emotion you put into this. Keep writing like this and you could be a published author! Also, when you write in quotations, start with a capital, even if it's not the beginning of the sentence. Here's an example:
Leo looked off into the distance and whispered, "It's all my fault..."
I hope this helps you in the future! And if you just forgot to, I apologize.

I absolutely love your stories! Again, a little pointer...
When you use quotations, make a new paragraph for each person speaking.
other than that, it was absolutely wonderful!

This was great! I loved how you used quotations in the poem as well. I didn't find anything that really stuck out in a bad sense, but then again I'm not very poetic...

This really lifted my spirits! I hope you're alright, though. If you need anyone to talk to, I'm here for you. Whatever you may be going through, I hope you can stick with this person you speak of and push through. Keep going, the world needs you, too!