United States • 4 y/oReviews Received
The "were you disappointed" HIT me in my gut- this was so good to read. Please, please keep writing :)
Beautiful, she did that to me once, in a play...
Really nice! Greed never gets anyone anywhere...
This is great! Luv the rhyme scheme <3
lol this is amazing...though it took a turn i wasn't expecting XD
This poem is not only exciting, but it really MOVES; best poem I've read since 'How they Brought the Good News from Ghent to Aix'!
Love it! Wow amazing😱☺ï¸ðŸ˜Š you are a star.
Okay... this was something else. I don't think it made much sense; at first, you begin praising this "Omega Lizard"... but in the end, you seem to be crushing the lizard with your bare hands with hatred so pure I thought only my 52-year-old gym teacher could possess it. I just wish that there was more information on why you so suddenly turned on this lord and why you were even praising a lizard in the first place...
It also might've been a bit much that you put "Religious" as your genre. You never know what people might find offensive these days.
But of course, you can believe in whatever you want to. I'm n̶o̶t̶ one to judge.