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Excellent commenting and fresh descriptions. Thank you for giving me a very good time.
A lighthearted but interesting idea. This should go down well with youngsters at Christmas.
What a wonderful story! Well done!
I really enjoyed that. Well done.
I enjoyed your poem. Well done.
Overall your descriptions are good. Just one thing, 'clutched' the guitar would be better than 'engulfed.' If you engulf something you cover it completely. One hand would'nt cover the whole guitar. Otherwise well done.
Excellent; truer words were never spoken, and in an entertaining manner!
Children will probably like how the parrot goes from zero to hero. It would take more than 20 parrots to right the ship but you're using a surreal premise all along so you might get away with it. Its a nice twist at the end.