United States • 23 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
Spice up your way of story telling, while I'm into these kinds of stories, I can't lie when I say I see potential. Just make the story more interesting, describe the atmosphere and setting a little more, set the scene and play the events out.
sad but I love it
love everything!!!!! great job
Oh my gosh that was frickin hallarious!! I loved it! I feel like I'm needing out. I do that a lot. The fact that I knew what most of those browsers and apps are is very embarrassing.
Great wording and use of irony
This is the funnest story I have ever read! Make more please!