United States • 21 y/oReviews Received
I like it, but it could be a bit longer, but I still like it.
It was cool... I felt just like when I fight with my mum...
But I found it really short. I felt that The story had just started and then it ended sooo soon!
An intriguing, passionate start. Time will show how it develops, but the first two instalments should draw people in.
Um.... BookNerd123...
I have one complain.... YOUR STORIES ARE EXTREMELY SHORT!!!
I mean that you write really short in one part and I feel (MY OPINION, PLEASE) it is very irritating and weird!
Hope u understand!
XOXO,
Sansid
This is nice, besides the grammatical problems. It seems to be recurrent. I've read your other stuff.
The story is amazing... I like it!
