Callie_Writes

I honestly love this piece of writing there is nothing I would change about it, hope you make a part two.

You may have not have tryed but it is amazing

This doesn't upset me, it's so real! Not to mention beautiful.

Dark, but such a deep meaning! personally love it.

This is so amazing! I love the flow!

I feel the same way, in terms of recent events. If you want to talk, text me, I'm a good shoulder to cry onto. This was great

I like this. You better make this a little more happy in the next chapter, because, while I do like sad things, this character needs some joy in her life.
This story has potential, so good luck!

Very good and I love it! Great start. But I hope in the next chapter we know the name of the main character and like Thomas Ray said, this person needs some joy.