Callie_Writes

I like this. You better make this a little more happy in the next chapter, because, while I do like sad things, this character needs some joy in her life.
This story has potential, so good luck!

This doesn't upset me, it's so real! Not to mention beautiful.

Very good and I love it! Great start. But I hope in the next chapter we know the name of the main character and like Thomas Ray said, this person needs some joy.

Dark, but such a deep meaning! personally love it.

This is so amazing! I love the flow!

You may have not have tryed but it is amazing

I feel the same way, in terms of recent events. If you want to talk, text me, I'm a good shoulder to cry onto. This was great

I honestly love this piece of writing there is nothing I would change about it, hope you make a part two.