Chantal

This is beautiful! I completely relate, and I know others do too! You did a great job with the way it sounds and how it rhymes. A wonderful poem, keep writing!

Hope of the poor. Not something I would encourage people to do. Can happen, but the probability is low. Most people invest so much in this hope that if they saved it over the years they would have some money or perhaps not.

Really nice poem! and nicely written.