Madison_Writes

I have felt like doing all of these things to myself but I think God really wants me to be on this earth because every time I try doing something like that somebody always walks into the room.

I love how you made it not rhyme but still seem catchy. It's hard to do that! You are a very talented writer. Can't wait to hear more!

To open up about your past takes great courage and strength, especially when it's one like this. I appreciate you sharing part of your story with us. I agree with the other comment, you should try channeling your emotions into your writing more and maybe it'll help you to get rid of your habits. I know what's it's like to be there, and I know it hurts but, believe me, it's only a chapter in your journey to becoming the great person you're meant to be. Stay strong, Madison.

I like it a lot. Great metaphor and great ending. Use of structure was great- short when it needed to be and added to the tone. Good job

I loved both stories...
That's exactly how my friendship ended with Natalie....
God I wish I could go back

5 stars

I like how repetitive it was and how it flowed, and I also like the format. I especially like the ending because it shows how resolved everything is in the end. Good poem

Honestly I wish it was ok
But some people don't get a happier ever after
Sometimes you just can't do it anymore
Sometimes the hurt
Wins