SJD ❤

Sad part is that this is too short,wishing for another part (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤

Sweet, This just gets better!!
so excited for the next part!!!!

Love the story, but not trying to be mean, but there are a few grammar, and spelling errors. But the story id great! :)

The first stanza is completely delightful. I love your use of repetition (anaphora, I think?), and the rhythm and meter flow beautifully. In the second stanza, I feel like we lost a bit of that flow, particularly in the last line, and in the last stanza, I feel like it was completely gone.
I think that because of your use of anaphora and the steadiness of the meter throughout the first half, it could be really powerful for you to switch it up a bit in the last stanza, but only if you give it a strong, define meter to really drive it home. I noticed that you weren't strictly using iambic meter for the more structured stanzas, but maybe if you tried to do so for the end, that could help. Anyway, I'm not entirely sure on that, but I hope it's helpful for you regardless.
I do enjoy the idea of the poem, and I feel like you have a lot of good potential for it!

This was a great setup for the reader to receive the emotion when reading.
One thing that could be done is by having "You know my favourite song and I know yours" towards the beginning. When I read it, I felt drawn away from the progression of the whole idea or meaning behind this. Overall quality though was amazing.

Simple and beautiful. Keep it up 😊😊