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I enjoyed the ending a lot and the begining was well paced the only ting i noticed with grammar was this line here "We here to see my dad," other than that nice job
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United States • 21 y/o • Male
"I don't suffer from insanity, I enjoy every minute of it"-Edgar Allan Poe
I enjoyed the ending a lot and the begining was well paced the only ting i noticed with grammar was this line here "We here to see my dad," other than that nice job