United States • 21 y/o • MaleReviews Received
Interesting.
There are a few spelling mistakes here, for instance 'fir' should be 'fur'. Fir is a coniferous tree. Having said that, it was a nice twist at the end. There's certainly some truth in the idea that he stood a better chance befriending the cat than chasing it.
Good story! Wouldve liked it to be a bit longer!!
I liked the idea behind this story! A lot of times the story is about a series of tasks that a young man has to do in order to win the lady's hand in marriage, often organized by her father, then an unlikely candidate presents himself and succeeds. So it was intriguing that the young women was directly involved with the challenge and probably initiated it herself which means she honestly wanted to get married, but also wanted to find someone who was willing to work for her hand as well as demonstrate promise of a loving and compassionate relationship.
So, yeah. This was super interesting! Good job!
Wow, just wow
I love the way you have a way to reach out to the audience.